{"id":6798,"date":"2024-12-12T08:00:23","date_gmt":"2024-12-12T01:00:23","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/smartcom.vn\/blog\/?p=6798"},"modified":"2025-04-17T17:27:20","modified_gmt":"2025-04-17T10:27:20","slug":"giai-de-ielts-writing-task-2-thi-may-idp-ngay-30-09-2024","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/smartcom.vn\/blog\/giai-de-ielts-writing-task-2-thi-may-idp-ngay-30-09-2024\/","title":{"rendered":"Gi\u1ea3i \u0111\u1ec1 IELTS Writing task 2 thi m\u00e1y t\u1ea1i IDP ng\u00e0y 30\/09\/2024"},"content":{"rendered":"\n\n
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During the 20th century, contact between different parts from the world has developed rapidly thanks to air travel and telecommunication. To what extent do you think that societies benefit from the increased contact and closer relationships with foreigners brought by international tourism and business?<\/span><\/p>\n

IDP – IELTS Computer-delivered test \u2013 September 30th<\/sup> 2024<\/span><\/p>\n<\/div>\n

D\u1ecbch \u0111\u1ec1 b\u00e0i:<\/strong> Trong th\u1ebf k\u1ef7 20, s\u1ef1 k\u1ebft n\u1ed1i gi\u1eefa c\u00e1c khu v\u1ef1c kh\u00e1c nhau tr\u00ean th\u1ebf gi\u1edbi \u0111\u00e3 ph\u00e1t tri\u1ec3n nhanh ch\u00f3ng nh\u1edd v\u00e0o du l\u1ecbch h\u00e0ng kh\u00f4ng v\u00e0 vi\u1ec5n th\u00f4ng. B\u1ea1n ngh\u0129 c\u00e1c x\u00e3 h\u1ed9i \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c h\u01b0\u1edfng l\u1ee3i \u0111\u1ebfn m\u1ee9c n\u00e0o t\u1eeb vi\u1ec7c gia t\u0103ng ti\u1ebfp x\u00fac v\u00e0 m\u1ed1i quan h\u1ec7 g\u1eafn k\u1ebft h\u01a1n v\u1edbi ng\u01b0\u1eddi n\u01b0\u1edbc ngo\u00e0i qua du l\u1ecbch v\u00e0 kinh doanh qu\u1ed1c t\u1ebf?<\/span><\/p>\n

\"giai-de-thi-ielts-writing-task-30-9-2024\"<\/p>\n

<\/span>H\u01b0\u1edbng d\u1eabn chi\u1ebfn thu\u1eadt l\u00e0m b\u00e0i<\/strong><\/span><\/span><\/h2>\n

B\u01b0\u1edbc 1: X\u00e1c \u0111\u1ecbnh r\u00f5 y\u00eau c\u1ea7u c\u1ee7a \u0111\u1ec1 b\u00e0i<\/strong><\/p>\n

\u0110\u1ec1 b\u00e0i thu\u1ed9c d\u1ea1ng c\u00e2u h\u1ecfi specific-questions v\u00e0 \u0111\u1ec1 b\u00e0i kh\u00e1c v\u1edbi c\u00e1c d\u1ea1ng b\u00e0i n\u00e0y c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c hi\u1ec3u nh\u01b0 sau: Y\u00eau c\u1ea7u ch\u00ednh l\u00e0 th\u1ea3o lu\u1eadn v\u1ec1 l\u1ee3i \u00edch m\u00e0 x\u00e3 h\u1ed9i c\u00f3 \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c t\u1eeb vi\u1ec7c t\u0103ng c\u01b0\u1eddng ti\u1ebfp x\u00fac v\u00e0 m\u1ed1i quan h\u1ec7 v\u1edbi ng\u01b0\u1eddi n\u01b0\u1edbc ngo\u00e0i<\/strong>, nh\u1edd v\u00e0o du l\u1ecbch v\u00e0 kinh doanh qu\u1ed1c t\u1ebf<\/strong>. C\u1ee5 th\u1ec3, \u0111\u1ec1 b\u00e0i h\u1ecfi v\u1ec1 m\u1ee9c \u0111\u1ed9<\/strong> (to what extent) m\u00e0 x\u00e3 h\u1ed9i h\u01b0\u1edfng l\u1ee3i t\u1eeb c\u00e1c m\u1ed1i quan h\u1ec7 n\u00e0y.<\/span><\/p>\n

C\u00f3 th\u1ec3 hi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ec1 b\u00e0i n\u00e0y nh\u01b0 sau:<\/p>\n

Ch\u1ee7 \u0111\u1ec1 ch\u00ednh<\/strong>: \u0110\u1ec1 c\u1eadp \u0111\u1ebfn s\u1ef1 ph\u00e1t tri\u1ec3n li\u00ean l\u1ea1c<\/strong> gi\u1eefa c\u00e1c khu v\u1ef1c kh\u00e1c nhau tr\u00ean th\u1ebf gi\u1edbi nh\u1edd v\u00e0o du l\u1ecbch h\u00e0ng kh\u00f4ng<\/strong> v\u00e0 vi\u1ec5n th\u00f4ng<\/strong>, t\u1eadp trung v\u00e0o du l\u1ecbch<\/strong> v\u00e0 kinh doanh qu\u1ed1c t\u1ebf<\/strong>.<\/p>\n

Y\u00eau c\u1ea7u<\/strong>: \u0110\u00e1nh gi\u00e1 m\u1ee9c \u0111\u1ed9 l\u1ee3i \u00edch<\/strong> m\u00e0 x\u00e3 h\u1ed9i c\u00f3 \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c t\u1eeb vi\u1ec7c ti\u1ebfp x\u00fac nhi\u1ec1u h\u01a1n v\u00e0 c\u00f3 m\u1ed1i quan h\u1ec7 ch\u1eb7t ch\u1ebd h\u01a1n v\u1edbi ng\u01b0\u1eddi n\u01b0\u1edbc ngo\u00e0i<\/strong>. \u0110i\u1ec1u n\u00e0y c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 bao g\u1ed3m c\u00e1c l\u0129nh v\u1ef1c nh\u01b0 kinh t\u1ebf, v\u0103n h\u00f3a, gi\u00e1o d\u1ee5c, x\u00e3 h\u1ed9i, ho\u1eb7c b\u1ea5t k\u1ef3 kh\u00eda c\u1ea1nh n\u00e0o kh\u00e1c m\u00e0 b\u1ea1n c\u1ea3m th\u1ea5y ph\u00f9 h\u1ee3p.<\/p>\n

Ph\u1ea1m vi th\u1ea3o lu\u1eadn<\/strong>: B\u00e0i vi\u1ebft c\u1ea7n n\u00eau r\u00f5 \u00fd ki\u1ebfn c\u1ee7a b\u1ea1n v\u1ec1 vi\u1ec7c x\u00e3 h\u1ed9i c\u00f3 l\u1ee3i \u00edch<\/strong> nhi\u1ec1u hay \u00edt t\u1eeb c\u00e1c m\u1ed1i quan h\u1ec7 v\u1edbi ng\u01b0\u1eddi n\u01b0\u1edbc ngo\u00e0i th\u00f4ng qua du l\u1ecbch v\u00e0 kinh doanh. B\u1ea1n c\u1ea7n \u0111\u01b0a ra l\u00fd l\u1ebd<\/strong> v\u00e0 v\u00ed d\u1ee5<\/strong> \u0111\u1ec3 minh h\u1ecda \u00fd ki\u1ebfn c\u1ee7a m\u00ecnh.<\/p>\n

B\u01b0\u1edbc 2: L\u00ean d\u00e0n \u00fd b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft\u00a0<\/strong><\/p>\n

B\u00e0i n\u00e0y c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 tri\u1ec3n khai theo l\u1eadp lu\u1eadn \u0111o\u1ea1n, t\u1ee9c th\u00e2n b\u00e0i g\u1ed3m 2 \u0111o\u1ea1n li\u1ec7t k\u00ea l\u1ee3i \u00edch v\u00e0 1 \u0111o\u1ea1n \u0111\u01b0a ra th\u00e1ch th\u1ee9c v\u00e0 h\u1ea1n ch\u1ebf. T\u00f9y v\u00e0o kh\u1ea3 n\u0103ng vi\u1ebft c\u1ee7a b\u1ea1n v\u00e0 kh\u1ea3 n\u0103ng tri\u1ec3n khai \u00fd t\u01b0\u1edfng, b\u1ea1n c\u0169ng c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 g\u1ed9p hai \u0111o\u1ea1n v\u0103n li\u1ec7t k\u00ea l\u1ee3i \u00edch v\u00e0o l\u00e0m m\u1ed9t, tuy nhi\u00ean, vi\u1ec7c t\u00e1ch \u0111o\u1ea1n nh\u01b0 li\u1ec7t k\u00ea d\u01b0\u1edbi \u0111\u00e2y s\u1ebd gi\u00fap cho b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft m\u1ea1ch l\u1ea1c v\u00e0 logic h\u01a1n.<\/p>\n

1. M\u1edf b\u00e0i (Introduction)<\/strong><\/p>\n

Gi\u1edbi thi\u1ec7u ch\u1ee7 \u0111\u1ec1<\/strong>: X\u00e1c nh\u1eadn s\u1ef1 ph\u00e1t tri\u1ec3n nhanh ch\u00f3ng c\u1ee7a giao th\u00f4ng h\u00e0ng kh\u00f4ng v\u00e0 vi\u1ec5n th\u00f4ng trong th\u1ebf k\u1ef7 20, v\u00e0 t\u1ea7m quan tr\u1ecdng c\u1ee7a vi\u1ec7c t\u0103ng c\u01b0\u1eddng k\u1ebft n\u1ed1i to\u00e0n c\u1ea7u.<\/p>\n

Tr\u1ea3 l\u1eddi c\u00e2u h\u1ecfi c\u1ee7a \u0111\u1ec1 b\u00e0i<\/strong>: N\u00eau r\u00f5 quan \u0111i\u1ec3m c\u1ee7a b\u1ea1n v\u1ec1 m\u1ee9c \u0111\u1ed9 x\u00e3 h\u1ed9i h\u01b0\u1edfng l\u1ee3i t\u1eeb s\u1ef1 gia t\u0103ng ti\u1ebfp x\u00fac v\u00e0 m\u1ed1i quan h\u1ec7 v\u1edbi ng\u01b0\u1eddi n\u01b0\u1edbc ngo\u00e0i th\u00f4ng qua du l\u1ecbch v\u00e0 kinh doanh qu\u1ed1c t\u1ebf.V\u00ed d\u1ee5<\/strong>: “I believe societies benefit significantly from increased international contact and relationships, as it fosters economic growth, cultural exchange, and global cooperation.”<\/p>\n

2. Th\u00e2n b\u00e0i 1 (Body paragraph 1)<\/strong>: L\u1ee3i \u00edch v\u1ec1 kinh t\u1ebf<\/strong><\/p>\n

Lu\u1eadn \u0111i\u1ec3m<\/strong>: Du l\u1ecbch v\u00e0 kinh doanh qu\u1ed1c t\u1ebf mang l\u1ea1i l\u1ee3i \u00edch l\u1edbn v\u1ec1 m\u1eb7t kinh t\u1ebf.<\/p>\n

L\u00fd gi\u1ea3i<\/strong>:<\/p>\n

– T\u1ea1o ra vi\u1ec7c l\u00e0m trong c\u00e1c ng\u00e0nh nh\u01b0 du l\u1ecbch, nh\u00e0 h\u00e0ng, kh\u00e1ch s\u1ea1n, v\u00e0 d\u1ecbch v\u1ee5.<\/p>\n

– Th\u00fac \u0111\u1ea9y \u0111\u1ea7u t\u01b0 n\u01b0\u1edbc ngo\u00e0i v\u00e0 trao \u0111\u1ed5i c\u00f4ng ngh\u1ec7, ki\u1ebfn th\u1ee9c.<\/p>\n

V\u00ed d\u1ee5<\/strong>: C\u00e1c th\u00e0nh ph\u1ed1 du l\u1ecbch nh\u01b0 Paris, Dubai thu h\u00fat h\u00e0ng tri\u1ec7u kh\u00e1ch du l\u1ecbch v\u00e0 nh\u00e0 \u0111\u1ea7u t\u01b0 qu\u1ed1c t\u1ebf m\u1ed7i n\u0103m, g\u00f3p ph\u1ea7n t\u0103ng GDP v\u00e0 t\u1ea1o ra vi\u1ec7c l\u00e0m.<\/p>\n

3. Th\u00e2n b\u00e0i 2 (Body paragraph 2)<\/strong>: L\u1ee3i \u00edch v\u1ec1 v\u0103n h\u00f3a v\u00e0 x\u00e3 h\u1ed9i<\/strong><\/p>\n

Lu\u1eadn \u0111i\u1ec3m<\/strong>: T\u0103ng c\u01b0\u1eddng ti\u1ebfp x\u00fac v\u1edbi ng\u01b0\u1eddi n\u01b0\u1edbc ngo\u00e0i th\u00f4ng qua du l\u1ecbch v\u00e0 kinh doanh gi\u00fap m\u1edf r\u1ed9ng t\u1ea7m nh\u00ecn v\u0103n h\u00f3a v\u00e0 x\u00e3 h\u1ed9i.<\/p>\n

L\u00fd gi\u1ea3i<\/strong>:<\/p>\n

– Th\u00fac \u0111\u1ea9y s\u1ef1 hi\u1ec3u bi\u1ebft gi\u1eefa c\u00e1c n\u1ec1n v\u0103n h\u00f3a, gi\u1ea3m thi\u1ec3u \u0111\u1ecbnh ki\u1ebfn.<\/p>\n

– T\u0103ng c\u01b0\u1eddng giao l\u01b0u v\u0103n h\u00f3a, ph\u00e1t tri\u1ec3n s\u1ef1 \u0111a d\u1ea1ng v\u0103n h\u00f3a trong x\u00e3 h\u1ed9i.<\/p>\n

V\u00ed d\u1ee5<\/strong>: Nh\u1eefng s\u1ef1 ki\u1ec7n qu\u1ed1c t\u1ebf nh\u01b0 l\u1ec5 h\u1ed9i v\u0103n h\u00f3a ho\u1eb7c h\u1ed9i ch\u1ee3 th\u01b0\u01a1ng m\u1ea1i thu h\u00fat s\u1ef1 tham gia c\u1ee7a nhi\u1ec1u qu\u1ed1c gia, gi\u00fap c\u00e1c n\u1ec1n v\u0103n h\u00f3a ti\u1ebfp c\u1eadn v\u00e0 h\u1ecdc h\u1ecfi l\u1eabn nhau.<\/p>\n

4. Th\u00e2n b\u00e0i 3 (Body paragraph 3)<\/strong>: Th\u00e1ch th\u1ee9c v\u00e0 h\u1ea1n ch\u1ebf<\/strong><\/p>\n

Lu\u1eadn \u0111i\u1ec3m<\/strong>: M\u1eb7c d\u00f9 c\u00f3 nhi\u1ec1u l\u1ee3i \u00edch, s\u1ef1 gia t\u0103ng ti\u1ebfp x\u00fac qu\u1ed1c t\u1ebf c\u0169ng mang l\u1ea1i m\u1ed9t s\u1ed1 th\u00e1ch th\u1ee9c.<\/p>\n

L\u00fd gi\u1ea3i<\/strong>:<\/p>\n

– S\u1ef1 ph\u1ee5 thu\u1ed9c qu\u00e1 m\u1ee9c v\u00e0o du l\u1ecbch c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 g\u00e2y ra t\u1ed5n h\u1ea1i cho m\u00f4i tr\u01b0\u1eddng v\u00e0 c\u00e1c ng\u00e0nh kinh t\u1ebf truy\u1ec1n th\u1ed1ng.<\/p>\n

– Kinh doanh qu\u1ed1c t\u1ebf c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 t\u1ea1o ra s\u1ef1 c\u1ea1nh tranh kh\u00f4ng l\u00e0nh m\u1ea1nh, \u0111\u1eb7c bi\u1ec7t \u0111\u1ed1i v\u1edbi c\u00e1c doanh nghi\u1ec7p nh\u1ecf.<\/p>\n

V\u00ed d\u1ee5<\/strong>: Nh\u1eefng \u0111i\u1ec3m du l\u1ecbch n\u1ed5i ti\u1ebfng c\u00f3 nguy c\u01a1 b\u1ecb qu\u00e1 t\u1ea3i v\u00e0 m\u00f4i tr\u01b0\u1eddng b\u1ecb h\u1ee7y ho\u1ea1i do l\u01b0\u1ee3ng kh\u00e1ch du l\u1ecbch t\u0103ng \u0111\u1ed9t bi\u1ebfn.<\/p>\n

5. K\u1ebft b\u00e0i (Conclusion)<\/strong><\/p>\n