{"id":6802,"date":"2024-11-06T03:31:26","date_gmt":"2024-11-06T03:31:26","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/smartcom.vn\/blog\/?p=6802"},"modified":"2024-12-10T03:00:32","modified_gmt":"2024-12-10T03:00:32","slug":"giai-de-ielts-writing-task-2-thi-may-bc-29-9-2024","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/smartcom.vn\/blog\/giai-de-ielts-writing-task-2-thi-may-bc-29-9-2024\/","title":{"rendered":"Gi\u1ea3i \u0111\u1ec1 IELTS Writing task 2 thi m\u00e1y t\u1ea1i BC ng\u00e0y 29\/09\/2024"},"content":{"rendered":"\n\n<div class=\"kk-star-ratings kksr-auto kksr-align-left kksr-valign-top\"\n    data-payload='{&quot;align&quot;:&quot;left&quot;,&quot;id&quot;:&quot;6802&quot;,&quot;slug&quot;:&quot;default&quot;,&quot;valign&quot;:&quot;top&quot;,&quot;ignore&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;reference&quot;:&quot;auto&quot;,&quot;class&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;count&quot;:&quot;2&quot;,&quot;legendonly&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;readonly&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;score&quot;:&quot;5&quot;,&quot;starsonly&quot;:&quot;&quot;,&quot;best&quot;:&quot;5&quot;,&quot;gap&quot;:&quot;5&quot;,&quot;greet&quot;:&quot;Rate this post&quot;,&quot;legend&quot;:&quot;5\\\/5 - (2 b\\u00ecnh ch\\u1ecdn)&quot;,&quot;size&quot;:&quot;24&quot;,&quot;title&quot;:&quot;Gi\\u1ea3i \\u0111\\u1ec1 IELTS Writing task 2 thi m\\u00e1y t\\u1ea1i BC ng\\u00e0y 29\\\/09\\\/2024&quot;,&quot;width&quot;:&quot;142.5&quot;,&quot;_legend&quot;:&quot;{score}\\\/{best} - ({count} {votes})&quot;,&quot;font_factor&quot;:&quot;1.25&quot;}'>\n            \n<div class=\"kksr-stars\">\n    \n<div class=\"kksr-stars-inactive\">\n            <div class=\"kksr-star\" data-star=\"1\" style=\"padding-right: 5px\">\n            \n\n<div class=\"kksr-icon\" style=\"width: 24px; height: 24px;\"><\/div>\n        <\/div>\n            <div class=\"kksr-star\" data-star=\"2\" style=\"padding-right: 5px\">\n            \n\n<div class=\"kksr-icon\" style=\"width: 24px; height: 24px;\"><\/div>\n        <\/div>\n            <div class=\"kksr-star\" data-star=\"3\" style=\"padding-right: 5px\">\n            \n\n<div class=\"kksr-icon\" style=\"width: 24px; height: 24px;\"><\/div>\n        <\/div>\n            <div class=\"kksr-star\" data-star=\"4\" style=\"padding-right: 5px\">\n            \n\n<div class=\"kksr-icon\" style=\"width: 24px; height: 24px;\"><\/div>\n        <\/div>\n            <div class=\"kksr-star\" data-star=\"5\" style=\"padding-right: 5px\">\n            \n\n<div class=\"kksr-icon\" style=\"width: 24px; height: 24px;\"><\/div>\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n    \n<div class=\"kksr-stars-active\" style=\"width: 142.5px;\">\n            <div class=\"kksr-star\" style=\"padding-right: 5px\">\n            \n\n<div class=\"kksr-icon\" style=\"width: 24px; height: 24px;\"><\/div>\n        <\/div>\n            <div class=\"kksr-star\" style=\"padding-right: 5px\">\n            \n\n<div class=\"kksr-icon\" style=\"width: 24px; height: 24px;\"><\/div>\n        <\/div>\n            <div class=\"kksr-star\" style=\"padding-right: 5px\">\n            \n\n<div class=\"kksr-icon\" style=\"width: 24px; height: 24px;\"><\/div>\n        <\/div>\n            <div class=\"kksr-star\" style=\"padding-right: 5px\">\n            \n\n<div class=\"kksr-icon\" style=\"width: 24px; height: 24px;\"><\/div>\n        <\/div>\n            <div class=\"kksr-star\" style=\"padding-right: 5px\">\n            \n\n<div class=\"kksr-icon\" style=\"width: 24px; height: 24px;\"><\/div>\n        <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<\/div>\n                \n\n<div class=\"kksr-legend\" style=\"font-size: 19.2px;\">\n            5\/5 - (2 b\u00ecnh ch\u1ecdn)    <\/div>\n    <\/div>\n<div dir=\"auto\">\n<div style=\"background: #ebf6e0; border-radius: 2px; border: 1px solid #b3dc82; box-sizing: border-box; float: none; margin: 0px auto; outline: 0px; padding: 15px 20px; vertical-align: baseline; color: #5f9025; font-family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 15px;\">\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">Some people believe that working hard and determination help them to be successful in life. Others think that there are other factors. Discuss both views and give your opinion.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: right;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt;\">BC &#8211; IELTS Computer-delivered test \u2013 September 29<sup>th<\/sup> 2024<\/span><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\"><span style=\"color: #000000; font-size: 12pt; font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;\">Smartcom IELTS xin g\u1eedi t\u1edbi c\u00e1c b\u1ea1n b\u00e0i h\u01b0\u1edbng d\u1eabn gi\u1ea3i \u0111\u1ec1 thi IELTS ng\u00e0y 29\/9\/2024 v\u1edbi h\u00ecnh th\u1ee9c thi tr\u00ean m\u00e1y t\u00ednh t\u1ea1i BC CMT8 &#8211; Viettel Complex Building.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\"><span style=\"color: #000000; font-size: 12pt; font-family: arial, helvetica, sans-serif;\">D\u1ecbch \u0111\u1ec1 b\u00e0i: M\u1ed9t s\u1ed1 ng\u01b0\u1eddi tin r\u1eb1ng l\u00e0m vi\u1ec7c ch\u0103m ch\u1ec9 v\u00e0 quy\u1ebft t\u00e2m s\u1ebd gi\u00fap h\u1ecd th\u00e0nh c\u00f4ng trong cu\u1ed9c s\u1ed1ng. Nh\u1eefng ng\u01b0\u1eddi kh\u00e1c ngh\u0129 r\u1eb1ng c\u00f3 nh\u1eefng y\u1ebfu t\u1ed1 kh\u00e1c n\u1eefa. Th\u1ea3o lu\u1eadn c\u1ea3 hai quan \u0111i\u1ec3m v\u00e0 \u0111\u01b0a ra \u00fd ki\u1ebfn \u200b\u200bc\u1ee7a b\u1ea1n.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-7548 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/smartcom.vn\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/11\/giai-de-thi-ielts-writing-task-29-9-24.jpg\" alt=\"giai-de-thi-ielts-writing-task-29-9-24\" width=\"1080\" height=\"720\" srcset=\"https:\/\/smartcom.vn\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/11\/giai-de-thi-ielts-writing-task-29-9-24.jpg 1080w, https:\/\/smartcom.vn\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/11\/giai-de-thi-ielts-writing-task-29-9-24-300x200.jpg 300w, https:\/\/smartcom.vn\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/11\/giai-de-thi-ielts-writing-task-29-9-24-1024x683.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/smartcom.vn\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/11\/giai-de-thi-ielts-writing-task-29-9-24-768x512.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 1080px) 100vw, 1080px\" \/><\/p>\n<h2><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"Huong_dan_chien_thuat_lam_bai\"><\/span><span style=\"font-size: 14pt; color: #000080;\">H\u01b0\u1edbng d\u1eabn chi\u1ebfn thu\u1eadt l\u00e0m b\u00e0i<\/span><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h2>\n<h3><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"Buoc_1_Xac_dinh_ro_yeu_cau_cua_de_bai\"><\/span><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; color: #000080;\">B\u01b0\u1edbc 1: X\u00e1c \u0111\u1ecbnh r\u00f5 y\u00eau c\u1ea7u c\u1ee7a \u0111\u1ec1 b\u00e0i<\/span><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h3>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">Khi \u0111\u1ecdc \u0111\u1ec1 IELTS writing task 2, c\u00f3 2 \u0111i\u1ec1u m\u00e0 c\u00e1c s\u0129 t\u1eed quan x\u00e1c \u0111\u1ecbnh r\u00f5 t\u1eeb b\u01b0\u1edbc \u0111\u1ea7u ti\u00ean \u0111\u00f3 l\u00e0:\u00a0<strong>1. Ch\u1ee7 \u0111\u1ec1<\/strong>; v\u00e0\u00a0<strong>2. D\u1ea1ng b\u00e0i<\/strong>. C\u1ee5 th\u1ec3 \u0111\u1ec1 b\u00e0i \u0111\u00e3 cho \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c hi\u1ec3u l\u00e0:\u00a0<em>\u201cM\u1ed9t s\u1ed1 ng\u01b0\u1eddi tin r\u1eb1ng l\u00e0m vi\u1ec7c ch\u0103m ch\u1ec9 v\u00e0 quy\u1ebft t\u00e2m gi\u00fap h\u1ecd th\u00e0nh c\u00f4ng trong cu\u1ed9c s\u1ed1ng. Nh\u1eefng ng\u01b0\u1eddi kh\u00e1c ngh\u0129 r\u1eb1ng c\u00f3 nh\u1eefng y\u1ebfu t\u1ed1 kh\u00e1c. Th\u1ea3o lu\u1eadn c\u1ea3 hai quan \u0111i\u1ec3m v\u00e0 \u0111\u01b0a ra \u00fd ki\u1ebfn \u200b\u200bc\u1ee7a b\u1ea1n.\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">Nh\u01b0 v\u1eady, ch\u1ee7 \u0111\u1ec1 c\u1ee7a b\u00e0i n\u00e0y l\u00e0 b\u00e0n v\u1ec1\u00a0<em><strong>S\u1ef1 ch\u0103m ch\u1ec9 v\u00e0 quy\u1ebft t\u00e2m <\/strong><\/em>v\u00e0 <em><strong>th\u00e0nh c\u00f4ng<\/strong><\/em>. D\u1ea1ng c\u00e2u h\u1ecfi l\u00e0\u00a0<strong>tranh lu\u1eadn v\u00e0 \u0111\u01b0a ra \u00fd ki\u1ebfn c\u00e1 nh\u00e2n.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\"><strong><u>Ch\u00fa \u00fd:<\/u><\/strong>\u00a0S\u0129 t\u1eed c\u1ea7n luy\u1ec7n IELTS k\u1ef9 l\u01b0\u1ee1ng th\u00ec m\u1edbi c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 vi\u1ebft b\u00e0i lu\u1eadn ti\u1ebfng Anh h\u1ecdc thu\u1eadt \u0111\u00e1p \u1ee9ng t\u1ed1t 4 ti\u00eau ch\u00ed ch\u1ea5m \u0111i\u1ec3m g\u1ed3m Task Response (\u0110\u00fang \u0111\u1ec1, \u0111\u1ee7 \u00fd), Coherence and Cohesion (B\u1ed1 c\u1ee5c logic &amp; li\u00ean k\u1ebft m\u1ea1ch l\u1ea1c), Lexical Resources (V\u1ed1n t\u1eeb v\u1ef1ng phong ph\u00fa) v\u00e0 Grammatical Range and Accuracy (Ng\u1eef ph\u00e1p phong ph\u00fa v\u00e0 ch\u00ednh x\u00e1c), \u0111\u1ed3ng th\u1eddi vi\u1ebft trong ph\u1ea1m vi th\u1eddi gian quy \u0111\u1ecbnh ch\u1ec9 l\u00e0 40 ph\u00fat v\u1edbi \u0111\u1ee7 \u0111\u1ed9 d\u00e0i (t\u1ed1i thi\u1ec3u l\u00e0 250 t\u1eeb, nh\u01b0ng t\u1ed1t h\u01a1n h\u1ebft h\u00e3y t\u1eadp vi\u1ebft v\u1edbi \u0111\u1ed9 d\u00e0i t\u1eeb 300 t\u1eeb tr\u1edf l\u00ean \u0111\u1ec3 l\u1ea5y \u0111i\u1ec3m s\u1ed1 cao h\u01a1n).<\/p>\n<h3><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"Buoc_2_Len_dan_y_bai_viet\"><\/span><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; color: #000080;\">B\u01b0\u1edbc 2: L\u00ean d\u00e0n \u00fd b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft<\/span><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h3>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">Th\u1ef1c ch\u1ea5t b\u01b0\u1edbc n\u00e0y th\u00ed sinh s\u1ebd kh\u00f4ng l\u00e0m trong ph\u00f2ng thi, m\u00e0 luy\u1ec7n t\u1eadp l\u00ean d\u00e0n \u00fd trong qu\u00e1 tr\u00ecnh luy\u1ec7n thi IELTS r\u1ed3i. V\u00e0o ph\u00f2ng thi, \u0111\u1ecdc \u0111\u1ec1 l\u00e0 ta ph\u1ea3i t\u1eadn d\u1ee5ng to\u00e0n b\u1ed9 40 ph\u00fat qu\u00fd b\u00e1u \u0111\u1ec3 vi\u1ebft, ch\u1ee9 kh\u00f4ng th\u1ec3 ng\u1ed3i suy ngh\u0129 v\u1ec1 d\u00e0n \u00fd n\u1eefa.<\/p>\n<p>Hi\u1ec7n nay \u0111\u1ec1 thi IELTS Writing Task 2 t\u1eadp trung v\u00e0o 5 d\u1ea1ng c\u00e2u h\u1ecfi ch\u00ednh g\u1ed3m:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><span style=\"color: #0000ff; text-decoration: underline;\"><a style=\"color: #0000ff; text-decoration: underline;\" href=\"https:\/\/smartcom.vn\/blog\/cach-lam-dang-bai-agree-or-disagree-trong-ielts-writing-task-2\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Agreeing vs Disagreeing<\/a><\/span><\/span><\/li>\n<li><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><span style=\"color: #0000ff; text-decoration: underline;\"><a style=\"color: #0000ff; text-decoration: underline;\" href=\"https:\/\/smartcom.vn\/blog\/positive-negative-development-ielts-writing-task-2\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Positive or Negative Development<\/a><\/span><\/span><\/li>\n<li><span style=\"text-decoration: underline; color: #0000ff;\"><a style=\"color: #0000ff; text-decoration: underline;\" href=\"https:\/\/smartcom.vn\/blog\/ielts-writing-task-2-dang-discussion\/\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Discuss both views<\/a><\/span> and give your opinion<\/li>\n<li>Outweighing<\/li>\n<li>Two-question essays<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">M\u1ed7i d\u1ea1ng b\u00e0i n\u00e0y \u0111\u1ec1u\u00a0<strong>c\u00f3 m\u1ed9t s\u1ed1 d\u00e0n \u00fd t\u01b0\u01a1ng \u1ee9ng<\/strong>, v\u00e0 ng\u01b0\u1eddi h\u1ecdc IELTS c\u1ea7n luy\u1ec7n tr\u01b0\u1edbc c\u00e1c d\u00e0n \u00fd n\u00e0y, \u0111\u1ec3 c\u00f3 s\u1eb5n d\u00e0n \u00fd trong \u0111\u1ea7u. Khi v\u00e0o b\u00e0i thi, \u0111\u1ed1i v\u1edbi m\u1ed7i c\u00e2u h\u1ecfi c\u1ee5 th\u1ec3 th\u00ec b\u1ea1n ch\u1ec9 c\u1ea7n thay \u00fd t\u01b0\u1edfng v\u00e0 ng\u00f4n t\u1eeb v\u00e0o l\u00e0 c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 vi\u1ebft tr\u1ecdn v\u1eb9n m\u1ed9t b\u00e0i lu\u1eadn Task 2 m\u1ed9t c\u00e1ch kh\u00e1 d\u1ec5 d\u00e0ng d\u1ef1a v\u00e0o d\u00e0n \u00fd trong \u0111\u1ea7u \u0111\u00e3 luy\u1ec7n. V\u1edbi d\u1ea1ng b\u00e0i Discuss both views and give your opinion nh\u01b0 \u0111\u1ec1 thi \u0111\u00e3 h\u1ecfi, ta n\u00ean vi\u1ebft theo b\u1ed1 c\u1ee5c 5 \u0111o\u1ea1n v\u0103n nh\u01b0 sau:<\/p>\n<ol>\n<li style=\"text-align: justify;\"><strong>\u0110o\u1ea1n m\u1edf b\u00e0i:<\/strong>\u00a0N\u00eau l\u1ea1i v\u1ea5n \u0111\u1ec1 \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c \u0111\u01b0a ra tranh lu\u1eadn b\u1eb1ng ng\u00f4n t\u1eeb c\u1ee7a ri\u00eang b\u1ea1n. Sau \u0111\u00f3 n\u00eau kh\u00e1i qu\u00e1t nh\u1eefng quan \u0111i\u1ec3m tranh lu\u1eadn \u0111\u1ed1i l\u1eadp nhau, v\u00e0 \u0111\u01b0a ra quan \u0111i\u1ec3m r\u1eb1ng b\u1ea1n \u0111\u1ed3ng \u00fd hay kh\u00f4ng \u0111\u1ed3ng \u00fd v\u1edbi nh\u1eadn \u0111\u1ecbnh c\u1ee7a \u0111\u1ec1 b\u00e0i.<\/li>\n<li style=\"text-align: justify;\"><strong>\u0110o\u1ea1n th\u00e2n b\u00e0i 1:<\/strong>\u00a0N\u00eau quan \u0111i\u1ec3m \u0111\u1ed1i l\u1eadp m\u00e0 b\u1ea1n kh\u00f4ng \u1ee7ng h\u1ed9. H\u00e3y t\u1eadp trung v\u00e0o m\u1ed9t \u00fd ch\u00ednh duy nh\u1ea5t (ch\u1ec9 ph\u00e2n t\u00edch m\u1ed9t quan \u0111i\u1ec3m ch\u00ednh), k\u00e8m theo l\u1eadp lu\u1eadn v\u00e0 v\u00ed d\u1ee5 c\u1ee5 th\u1ec3 \u0111\u1ec3 t\u0103ng t\u00ednh logic c\u1ee7a b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft. Ch\u00fa \u00fd: vi\u1ec7c ph\u00e2n t\u00edch quan \u0111i\u1ec3m \u0111\u1ed1i l\u1eadp n\u00e0y l\u00e0 \u0111i\u1ec1u c\u1ea7n thi\u1ebft trong v\u0103n h\u1ecdc thu\u1eadt ti\u1ebfng Anh, n\u00f3 th\u1ec3 hi\u1ec7n b\u1ea1n c\u00f3 c\u00e1i nh\u00ecn kh\u00e1ch quan, c\u00f3 c\u00e2n nh\u1eafc \u0111\u1ebfn c\u00e1c quan \u0111i\u1ec3m kh\u00e1c nhau tr\u01b0\u1edbc khi \u0111\u01b0a ra quan \u0111i\u1ec3m c\u1ee7a c\u00e1 nh\u00e2n m\u00ecnh.<\/li>\n<li style=\"text-align: justify;\"><strong>\u0110o\u1ea1n th\u00e2n b\u00e0i 2:<\/strong>\u00a0N\u00eau quan \u0111i\u1ec3m m\u00e0 b\u1ea1n \u1ee7ng h\u1ed9. H\u00e3y t\u1eadp trung vi\u1ebft v\u00e0o m\u1ed9t quan \u0111i\u1ec3m m\u00e0 b\u1ea1n th\u1ea5y c\u00f3 s\u1ee9c \u1ea3nh h\u01b0\u1edfng nh\u1ea5t, kh\u00f4ng \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c vi\u1ebft nhi\u1ec1u h\u01a1n 1 quan \u0111i\u1ec3m, \u0111\u1ec3 tr\u00e1nh b\u1ecb tr\u1eeb \u0111i\u1ec3m Coherence and Cohesion. Sau \u0111\u00f3 \u0111\u01b0a ra c\u00e1c l\u00fd do, c\u00e1ch th\u1ee9c ho\u1eb7c ph\u00e2n t\u00edch s\u00e2u h\u01a1n v\u1ec1 quan \u0111i\u1ec3m \u0111\u00f3, v\u00e0 \u0111\u01b0a ra v\u00ed d\u1ee5 ho\u1eb7c b\u1eb1ng ch\u1ee9ng c\u1ee5 th\u1ec3 \u0111\u1ec3 kh\u1eb3ng \u0111\u1ecbnh l\u00fd l\u1ebd c\u1ee7a b\u1ea1n.<\/li>\n<li style=\"text-align: justify;\"><strong>\u0110o\u1ea1n th\u00e2n b\u00e0i 3:<\/strong>\u00a0Ph\u00e2n t\u00edch quan \u0111i\u1ec3m c\u00e1 nh\u00e2n c\u1ee7a b\u1ea1n. \u0110o\u1ea1n n\u00e0y b\u1ea1n n\u00eau r\u00f5 t\u1ea1i sao b\u1ea1n \u1ee7ng h\u1ed9 quan \u0111i\u1ec3m \u0111\u00e3 n\u00eau ra \u1edf \u0111o\u1ea1n th\u00e2n b\u00e0i 2, b\u1eb1ng c\u00e1ch \u0111\u01b0a ra l\u00fd do \u1ee7ng h\u1ed9, ho\u1eb7c \u0111\u01b0a ra nh\u1eefng l\u00fd l\u1ebd \u0111\u1ec3 b\u00e1c b\u1ecf ho\u1eb7c ph\u00ea ph\u00e1n quan \u0111i\u1ec3m \u0111\u1ed1i l\u1eadp.<\/li>\n<li style=\"text-align: justify;\"><strong>\u0110o\u1ea1n k\u1ebft b\u00e0i:<\/strong>\u00a0\u0110o\u1ea1n n\u00e0y b\u1ea1n nh\u1eafc l\u1ea1i quan \u0111i\u1ec3m c\u1ee7a m\u00ecnh v\u1ec1 vi\u1ec7c \u1ee7ng h\u1ed9 m\u1eb7t n\u00e0o. Sau \u0111\u00f3 b\u1ea1n n\u00ean vi\u1ebft th\u00eam c\u00e2u k\u00eau g\u1ecdi h\u00e0nh \u0111\u1ed9ng ho\u1eb7c l\u1eddi khuy\u00ean t\u01b0\u01a1ng \u1ee9ng v\u1edbi m\u1eb7t m\u00e0 b\u1ea1n \u1ee7ng h\u1ed9.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">Mu\u1ed1n vi\u1ebft \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c hi\u1ec7u qu\u1ea3 m\u1ed9t b\u00e0i lu\u1eadn tranh lu\u1eadn quan \u0111i\u1ec3m nh\u01b0 \u1edf c\u00e2u h\u1ecfi n\u00e0y, vi\u1ec7c c\u00f3 b\u1ed1 c\u1ee5c b\u00e0i vi\u1ebft l\u00e0 ch\u01b0a \u0111\u1ee7, m\u00e0 b\u1ea1n c\u1ea7n th\u00eam t\u1ed1i thi\u1ec3u hai \u0111i\u1ec1u n\u1eefa g\u1ed3m: c\u00f3 ki\u1ebfn th\u1ee9c v\u1ec1 ch\u1ee7 \u0111\u1ec1 m\u00e0 b\u1ea1n vi\u1ebft k\u00e8m theo v\u1ed1n t\u1eeb v\u1ef1ng ti\u1ebfng Anh c\u1ee7a n\u00f3, v\u00e0 c\u00f3 v\u1ed1n c\u1ea5u tr\u00fac ng\u1eef ph\u00e1p \u00edt nh\u1ea5t l\u00e0 \u0111\u1ee7 \u0111\u1ec3 h\u00ecnh th\u00e0nh c\u00e1c c\u00e2u, di\u1ec5n \u0111\u1ea1t tr\u1ecdn v\u1eb9n \u00fd m\u00e0 b\u1ea1n mu\u1ed1n vi\u1ebft. \u0110i\u1ec1u n\u00e0y \u0111\u00f2i h\u1ecfi b\u1ea1n ph\u1ea3i nghi\u00ean c\u1ee9u trong m\u1ed9t th\u1eddi gian nh\u1ea5t \u0111\u1ecbnh, ho\u1eb7c \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c \u0111\u00e0o t\u1ea1o b\u1edfi gi\u00e1o vi\u00ean IELTS chuy\u00ean nghi\u1ec7p.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">Tr\u01b0\u1edbc m\u1eaft, xin m\u1eddi b\u1ea1n nghi\u00ean c\u1ee9u m\u1ed9t s\u1ed1 ki\u1ebfn th\u1ee9c v\u1ec1 ch\u1ee7 \u0111\u1ec1 s\u1ee9c \u1ea3nh h\u01b0\u1edfng c\u1ee7a ch\u0103m ch\u1ec9 \u0111\u1ebfn th\u00e0nh c\u00f4ng v\u00e0 nh\u1eefng m\u1eb7t kh\u00e1c c\u00f3 th\u1ec3 \u0111\u00f3ng g\u00f3p cho th\u00e0nh c\u00f4ng. \u0110o\u1ea1n g\u1ee3i \u00fd ki\u1ebfn th\u1ee9c v\u00e0 \u00fd t\u01b0\u1edfng d\u01b0\u1edbi \u0111\u00e2y \u0111\u01b0\u1ee3c tr\u00ecnh b\u00e0y b\u1eb1ng ti\u1ebfng Anh \u0111\u1ec3 v\u1eeba cung c\u1ea5p ki\u1ebfn th\u1ee9c, v\u1eeba cung c\u1ea5p c\u1ea5u tr\u00fac c\u00e2u, v\u1eeba cung c\u1ea5p v\u1ed1n t\u1eeb ti\u1ebfng Anh cho b\u1ea1n.<\/p>\n<h2><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"Tu_duy_va_kien_thuc_ve_chu_de\"><\/span><span style=\"font-size: 14pt; color: #000080;\">T\u01b0 duy v\u00e0 ki\u1ebfn th\u1ee9c v\u1ec1 ch\u1ee7 \u0111\u1ec1<\/span><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h2>\n<h3><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"Argument_1_Hard_work_and_determination_lead_to_success\"><\/span><span style=\"font-size: 12pt; color: #000080;\">Argument 1: Hard work and determination lead to success<\/span><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h3>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"text-align: justify;\"><strong>Consistent effort<\/strong>: Those who believe in the power of hard work argue that putting in consistent effort over time yields results. For example, someone who practices a skill every day will likely improve, regardless of their starting point. Over time, this continuous effort accumulates, leading to significant progress and, eventually, success.<\/li>\n<li style=\"text-align: justify;\"><strong>Discipline<\/strong>: Discipline involves staying focused on goals and avoiding distractions. People who are disciplined can manage their time well, prioritize tasks, and avoid procrastination, which are all essential for achieving success. For instance, athletes or professionals who follow a strict routine are more likely to succeed due to their self-discipline.<\/li>\n<li style=\"text-align: justify;\"><strong>Perseverance<\/strong>: Success often comes after a series of failures. Those who argue for hard work and determination point out that people who persevere\u2014who don\u2019t give up after facing challenges\u2014are more likely to eventually succeed. This attitude of not quitting, even when the journey becomes difficult, is seen as critical to long-term achievement.<\/li>\n<li style=\"text-align: justify;\"><strong>Self-made success stories<\/strong>: Many famous entrepreneurs and public figures started with limited resources or faced early failures, yet they became successful through sheer determination. Elon Musk, for instance, faced setbacks with his early companies, but he persisted, eventually building Tesla and SpaceX into massive successes. Such stories highlight how hard work and determination can overcome even significant challenges.<\/li>\n<li style=\"text-align: justify;\"><strong>Belief in meritocracy<\/strong>: Those who hold this view often believe in a merit-based system, where individuals are rewarded for their efforts. They argue that, in most cases, success is a direct result of personal effort, and that people who work harder will generally outperform those who don\u2019t, regardless of their background.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h3><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"Argument_2_Other_factors_contribute_to_success\"><\/span><span style=\"font-size: 12pt;\">Argument 2: Other factors contribute to success<\/span><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h3>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"text-align: justify;\"><strong>Luck and opportunities<\/strong>: While hard work is important, many argue that luck plays a significant role in success. For example, being in the right place at the right time can lead to opportunities that others might not have access to. Someone might happen to meet a key investor, or a job opportunity may arise simply due to timing, which hard work alone cannot account for.<\/li>\n<li style=\"text-align: justify;\"><strong>External support<\/strong>: Success often depends on the support of others, whether it be family, mentors, or a professional network. People who have access to strong support systems are more likely to succeed because they can draw on resources, advice, and connections that others might not have. For example, an aspiring entrepreneur with family funding or influential contacts has a distinct advantage over someone who lacks these resources.<\/li>\n<li style=\"text-align: justify;\"><strong>Societal and economic conditions<\/strong>: The environment in which a person grows up can heavily influence their success. Access to quality education, healthcare, and a stable economic environment can provide a strong foundation for success. Conversely, someone born in a disadvantaged community may face structural barriers that hard work alone may not overcome.<\/li>\n<li style=\"text-align: justify;\"><strong>Inherited advantages<\/strong>: Family wealth, connections, or a privileged upbringing can provide a head start in life. Someone born into a wealthy or well-connected family may have access to better education, job opportunities, or investment capital, which puts them on a different path from those who don\u2019t have such advantages. This is why some argue that success isn\u2019t purely a matter of effort.<\/li>\n<li style=\"text-align: justify;\"><strong>Inequality of opportunity<\/strong>: Despite hard work, not everyone has the same chances for success due to societal inequalities. Some people start with far fewer resources or face discrimination, making it harder for them to succeed no matter how hard they work. This perspective emphasizes the role of systemic factors in determining success, such as race, gender, or economic background, which can limit opportunities for some while amplifying them for others.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h2><span class=\"ez-toc-section\" id=\"Bai_luan_hoan_thien\"><\/span><span style=\"font-size: 14pt; color: #000080;\">B\u00e0i lu\u1eadn ho\u00e0n thi\u1ec7n<\/span><span class=\"ez-toc-section-end\"><\/span><\/h2>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-7551 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/smartcom.vn\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/11\/giai-de-thi-ielts-writing-task-2-BC-30-9-24.png\" alt=\"giai-de-thi-ielts-writing-task-2-BC-30-9-24\" width=\"1080\" height=\"720\" srcset=\"https:\/\/smartcom.vn\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/11\/giai-de-thi-ielts-writing-task-2-BC-30-9-24.png 1080w, https:\/\/smartcom.vn\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/11\/giai-de-thi-ielts-writing-task-2-BC-30-9-24-300x200.png 300w, https:\/\/smartcom.vn\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/11\/giai-de-thi-ielts-writing-task-2-BC-30-9-24-1024x683.png 1024w, https:\/\/smartcom.vn\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2024\/11\/giai-de-thi-ielts-writing-task-2-BC-30-9-24-768x512.png 768w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 1080px) 100vw, 1080px\" \/><\/p>\n<div style=\"background: #ebf6e0; border-radius: 2px; border: 1px solid #b3dc82; box-sizing: border-box; float: none; margin: 0px auto; outline: 0px; padding: 15px 20px; vertical-align: baseline; color: #5f9025; font-family: arial, sans-serif; font-size: 15px;\">\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\"><span style=\"color: #000000; font-size: 12pt;\">Success is a<strong><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"> multifaceted<\/span> <\/strong>concept, and people have different opinions on what leads to it. While some argue that hard work and <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>determination<\/strong> <\/span>are the <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>primary drivers<\/strong><\/span>, others believe that success is influenced by various <strong><span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\">external factors<\/span><\/strong>. Both views have merit, and this essay will discuss both perspectives before offering my own opinion.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\"><span style=\"color: #000000; font-size: 12pt;\">On one hand, many people argue that success comes from hard work and <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>perseverance<\/strong><\/span>. They believe that no matter the <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>obstacles<\/strong><\/span>, a person can achieve their goals if they remain determined and put in the necessary effort. For example, many successful <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>entrepreneurs<\/strong><\/span>, <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>athletes<\/strong><\/span>, and artists have shared stories of <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>working tirelessly<\/strong><\/span> through difficulties to reach their achievements. Proponents of this view often highlight famous examples such as Steve Jobs and Elon Musk, who are seen as <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>embodiments<\/strong> <\/span>of <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>grit<\/strong> <\/span>and innovation. According to this perspective, success is primarily a matter of personal effort and <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>self-discipline<\/strong><\/span>.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\"><span style=\"color: #000000; font-size: 12pt;\">On the other hand, there are those who argue that success depends on factors beyond individual control, such as luck, <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>social background<\/strong><\/span>, and access to resources. This view emphasizes that some people may work equally hard but achieve different results due to advantages like being born into wealthy families, having strong social connections, or simply being in the right place at the right time. For instance, someone with access to quality education, <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>supportive mentors<\/strong><\/span>, and <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>financial stability<\/strong><\/span> is more likely to succeed compared to someone without those advantages, regardless of their effort. Additionally, opportunities can arise due to timing or circumstances, which hard work alone cannot <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>guarantee<\/strong><\/span>.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\"><span style=\"color: #000000; font-size: 12pt;\">In my opinion, while hard work and <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>determination<\/strong> <\/span>are <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>essential ingredients<\/strong><\/span> for success, they are not sufficient on their own. <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>External factors<\/strong> <\/span>like opportunities, luck, and social connections play a crucial role in shaping one\u2019s success. A balanced perspective would acknowledge that success is a combination of <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>individual effort<\/strong> <\/span>and the opportunities that come along the way.<\/span><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: right;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt;\">( 312 words &#8211; band 9.0) &#8211; By Smartcom IELTS Teachers<\/span><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<p><strong>T\u1eeb v\u1ef1ng trong b\u00e0i lu\u1eadn<\/strong><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><strong>multifaceted<\/strong> \/\u02ccm\u028clti\u02c8f\u00e6s\u026at\u026ad\/ (adj): nhi\u1ec1u kh\u00eda c\u1ea1nh<\/li>\n<li><strong>determination<\/strong> \/d\u026a\u02cct\u025c\u02d0m\u026a\u02c8ne\u026a\u0283\u0259n\/ (n): s\u1ef1 quy\u1ebft t\u00e2m<\/li>\n<li><strong>primary driver<\/strong> \/\u02c8pra\u026am\u0259ri \u02c8dra\u026av\u0259\/ (n): nh\u00e2n t\u1ed1 ch\u00ednh<\/li>\n<li><strong>external factor<\/strong> \/\u026ak\u02c8st\u025c\u02d0n\u0259l \u02c8f\u00e6kt\u0259\/ (n): y\u1ebfu t\u1ed1 b\u00ean ngo\u00e0i<\/li>\n<li><strong>perseverance<\/strong> \/\u02ccp\u025c\u02d0s\u026a\u02c8v\u026a\u0259r\u0259ns\/ (n): s\u1ef1 ki\u00ean tr\u00ec<\/li>\n<li><strong>obstacle<\/strong> \/\u02c8\u0252bst\u0259kl\/ (n): ch\u01b0\u1edbng ng\u1ea1i, tr\u1edf ng\u1ea1i<\/li>\n<li><strong>entrepreneur<\/strong> \/\u02cc\u0252ntr\u0259pr\u0259\u02c8n\u025c\u02d0r\/ (n): doanh nh\u00e2n<\/li>\n<li><strong>athlete<\/strong> \/\u02c8\u00e6\u03b8li\u02d0t\/ (n): v\u1eadn \u0111\u1ed9ng vi\u00ean<\/li>\n<li><strong>to work tirelessly<\/strong> \/t\u0259 w\u025c\u02d0k \u02c8ta\u026a\u0259l\u026asli\/ (v): l\u00e0m vi\u1ec7c kh\u00f4ng ng\u1eebng ngh\u1ec9<\/li>\n<li><strong>embodiment<\/strong> \/\u026am\u02c8b\u0252dim\u0259nt\/ (n): hi\u1ec7n th\u00e2n<\/li>\n<li><strong>grit<\/strong> \/\u0261r\u026at\/ (n): l\u00f2ng can \u0111\u1ea3m, s\u1ef1 b\u1ec1n b\u1ec9<\/li>\n<li><strong>self-discipline<\/strong> \/\u02ccself\u02c8d\u026as\u026apl\u026an\/ (n): k\u1ef7 lu\u1eadt t\u1ef1 gi\u00e1c<\/li>\n<li><strong>social background<\/strong> \/\u02c8s\u0259\u028a\u0283\u0259l \u02c8b\u00e6kgra\u028and\/ (n): ho\u00e0n c\u1ea3nh x\u00e3 h\u1ed9i<\/li>\n<li><strong>supportive mentor<\/strong> \/s\u0259\u02c8p\u0254\u02d0t\u026av \u02c8ment\u0254\u02d0\/ (n): ng\u01b0\u1eddi c\u1ed1 v\u1ea5n h\u1ed7 tr\u1ee3<\/li>\n<li><strong>financial stability<\/strong> \/fa\u026a\u02c8n\u00e6n\u0283\u0259l st\u0259\u02c8b\u026al\u0259ti\/ (n): s\u1ef1 \u1ed5n \u0111\u1ecbnh t\u00e0i ch\u00ednh<\/li>\n<li><strong>guarantee<\/strong> \/\u02cc\u0261\u00e6r\u0259n\u02c8ti\u02d0\/ (v): \u0111\u1ea3m b\u1ea3o<\/li>\n<li><strong>essential ingredients<\/strong> \/\u026a\u02c8sen\u0283\u0259l \u026an\u02c8\u0261ri\u02d0di\u0259nts\/ (n): y\u1ebfu t\u1ed1 c\u1ea7n thi\u1ebft<\/li>\n<li><strong>individual effort<\/strong> \/\u02cc\u026and\u026a\u02c8v\u026ad\u0292u\u0259l \u02c8ef\u0259t\/ (n): n\u1ed7 l\u1ef1c c\u00e1 nh\u00e2n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p style=\"text-align: justify;\">Tr\u00ean 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